Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Lauded by Critics

" Lauded by Critics "

by Suzán Jiván

Performed on YouTube

Lauded by critics
with a flicker
for anyone interested
in miniature
differences in wit
as a state of weariness
without a trace of vagueness
between action and restraint
Shockingly clinical
blighted by road signs
funneling light
toward matinees idols
in full light
with spikes of sapphire
scrutinized
by actual life
on multiple sites
Guided by bona fides
from earlier times
like strivings
in little bits
brimming
with papier-mâché
figures
as blissful walk-ins
Imagining similar skits
intermittently
mounting multichannel
legacies
unflinching with cerulean
skin above suspicion
Like funkier digital quips
slightly off-kilter
when joining the ticket
with dissenting opinions
appearing as free-spirited mimics
invariably with antipathy
and added instability
Executed in gridded order
all for a cause all according
to inordinate laws
dipped in mortar with a blurry aura
Painted toylike
commensurate with memory
and too little evidence
while pondered with stark
closely bobbed locks of harshness...

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